negative critique !!!

photo number 1) out of all my exposers Exposer number 15 would be among my favorites it would be of a classmate of ours the photo looks great reasons being its candid, the focus is on her, its centered and there isn't really anything to discract you from what your looking at well only a bit on the left sidie of the photo where a persons might stand out but not enough to distract you from her. The lighting is good aswell no overexposed photo here.

photo number 2) exposer number 10 its totally candid the focus is more or less directly oh my subject the lighting is good aswell and my subject looks very puzzled its pretty funny.

i did find some waterspots on some of my photos and 1 of my photos was pretty blury other than that for my first time i think i did an ok job

Pinhole photos whoa!

Ok to first start off these photos are both small but thats how they saved on my computer :\ sorry about that. But anyway lets get started

This photo i would have to say i dislike reason ONE would be because i couldn't tell what this photo was at all its extremely blurry and the lighting is horrible .I found out what this picture was when i saved it onto my computer and its a show of a elevator.Though the angle was ok it helped non knowing what the photo was . If you look closely there is a trash bag on the bottom left of the photo.
Now this photo i was very impressed with.Right off the back i could tell what this photo was of (a flower).The lighting was very good not blurry at all and not over exposed.The subject is centered enough to leave just enough dead space. And i would say the only distracting thing on this photo would be the object on the left of it but other than that its a great photo.